Divide the words to further convey the idea of humanity's division. You are such a genius, Nicole. Great poem. Thank you for sharing, have a wonderful day!
Hi Nicole! Every day when I open social media, it feels like “this side” and “that side” are fighting each other, doesn’t it? Even though everyone is just ordinary people who are tired, working hard, and carrying their own anxieties in the same way, it somehow feels like only the direction of our anger is being skillfully manipulated. It honestly makes me uneasy. 🫤
Okay, I am old. Took a few lines to notice there were words to the right. Made much more sense than. Great thought, idea, etc. Don't just read it, you see the divide. I feel that between us and them is We the people!.
Dividing your lines the way you did was an outstanding move and your spot on, this is great work
Thank you, Olly! ❤️
Divide the words to further convey the idea of humanity's division. You are such a genius, Nicole. Great poem. Thank you for sharing, have a wonderful day!
Nick, thank you so much for reading this one, I know your eyes must have gotten a training lol! Enjoy your day! 🌹
This is so powerful cause it's so true. Seeing the literal division made it even more visceral.
Mila, thank you! 🤗
Hi Nicole! Every day when I open social media, it feels like “this side” and “that side” are fighting each other, doesn’t it? Even though everyone is just ordinary people who are tired, working hard, and carrying their own anxieties in the same way, it somehow feels like only the direction of our anger is being skillfully manipulated. It honestly makes me uneasy. 🫤
The crick in my neck proves you have made your point!🥴
Ahah thank you for staying with this concept, Alicia! :)))
One has to stay focused here. It's like the left and the right brain have to work in tandem. And then one comes to a screeching halt at the point.
Thank you, Greg, for going with the flow on this poem!
Talk about the total package. Words to tantalise the grey matter and the amazing visuals also . Thank you for sharing your creativity and talent.
Leonorra, thank you for reading this with me!
New alignment but
ton?
Tell me
how!
Or we may
end up
on the wrong side
of a great
divide. :-(
Lol, thank you! Stay on my side, it has the good buttons! 🤗
Okay, I am old. Took a few lines to notice there were words to the right. Made much more sense than. Great thought, idea, etc. Don't just read it, you see the divide. I feel that between us and them is We the people!.
Thank you, Ed! Been thinking for few weeks how to use the new alignment button they enabled in Substack. :)))) Sorry for the confusion! 🤗
I usually write off of Substack and then copy and paste my story. Good to see they are working on making it a better writing platform.
Haunting.
Thank you, Alice!